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• 吕同学
  写一篇我的大学生活英语作文 120词
  • 刘老师
    like the vast majority are too high to accept the most solemn baptism of three young with too much of the most chaotic of the three young college students feel like a big eye-catching red chuaizhuo university admissions i notice in the eyes of their parents look forward to the feelings of pleasure way into the shanghai fisheries university. after a series of complicated enrollment procedures and parents tizhe da packages of baggage busy went to the designated bedroom. one into the room as expected and expected the same four human small bedroom had been packed in together and every newborns family sent out almost all even though the weather was hot and abnormal arrangement of housekeeping is tired big sweat dripping
    can we have everyones faces filled with happy smile. end finally clean up the room saying good-bye of the worth of the parents asked warned him and we will be living together four four-year roommate finally able to communicate well about each others affection. a different character different experiences but holding the same yearning for a better college life so we immediately started arising out of strange and shy as can talk about anything as if an old friend not seen in a long time the same way we lying on their bed space and different places to chat up seem to have lots to talk about words. it is because of this in such a sultry summer night we sleep a
    spent a period in pre-school excitement carefree happy life of indulgence we are going to face is the real university life. freshman year of study not related to professional courses but lay a solid foundation of knowledge with emphasis on english language learning to develop good habits to master the english language proficiency dialogue and writing capabilities. in fact as long as the serious lectures and complete the exercise the examination can cope easily easily resolved. freshman curriculum also very different from primary and secondary schools curriculum less is more some subjects only last week relative to a day left to get a lot of his spare time and sometimes only one lesson a day only . 就像绝大多数接受过高三青春最庄严的洗礼，拥有过高三青春最纷乱的心情的大学新生一样，揣着醒目的大红色大学录取通知书的我，在父母期盼的目光下，心情愉悦地走进了上海水产大学。在办完一连串繁琐的入学手续后，和父母提着大包小包的行李忙忙碌碌地赶往指定的寝室。一踏入房间，果然和预料的一样，小小的四人间寝室已被挤得满满的了，每个新生的家人几乎全体出动，尽管当时的天气炎热异常，布置整理房间已是累得大汗淋漓，可大家每个人的脸上都洋溢着幸福的笑容。好不容易收拾完房间，送走了万般嘱咐叮咛的父母，我们这四个将要共同居住四年的室友终于可以好好地交流一下彼此的感情了。不同的性格，不同的经历，但抱着同样对大学生活的美好向往，使我们立刻摆脱刚开始产生的陌生和害羞，成为无话不谈，好似许久未见的老朋友一样，就这样，我们躺在各自的床上海阔天空，天南地北地聊起来，似乎有说不完的话。也就是因为如此，在这样一个闷热的夏夜，我们失眠了
    在度过了一段开学前心情激动，无忧无虑，开心放纵的生活后，我们即将面临的就是真正的大学生活。大一的学习还未涉及专业课程，只是打好基础知识，重点在于培养良好的英语学习习惯，掌握熟练的英语对话，写作等能力。其实只要认真听课及完成习题，考试都能应付自如，轻松解决。大一的课程安排也与中小学的截然不同，课程少而精，有的学科一星期才上一次，相对地，每天留给自己的课余时间变得很多了，有时一天只有一节课而已。
• C同学
  英语考研作文话题模板
  • 李老师
    (1)as is vividly depicted in the picture(描述图画).(2) the most striking feature is(图画重点信息).(3)there is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.
    第二自然段重点论述主题，第一句可以用一个有爆发力的主题句阐释主题的重要性。第二句谈这个现象的永恒的社会意义可以用一个排比句说明只要有这个现象就可以让我们不断征服挑战和竞争并最后走向成功。第三句可以是具体的例子谈根据一项调查表明这个积极的现象对人有利。第四句可以从反面谈如果没有这个积极现象人们生活就忧闷有挫折感无前进动力前途渺茫。第五句作总结，谈只有这个现象才能让我们成为社会的成功者。
    (1)as is symbolically depicted/shown in the set of drawings the fact that(重复上面的图画信息) profoundly indicates that 主题 is momentous (重要的) and fundamental to any one who undertakes great deeds. (2)undoubtedly it is 主题 that keeps us continually doing something valuable and admirable in spite of difficulties that makes us still full of energy to face the coming challenges and competition and that offers us the foundation for success. (3) according to a survey made by china daily 与主题相关的好的后果.(4)if 不这样的话 we will live a dull and depressing life or even feel loss of hope about the future. (5)only by 主题 can you put your capacities into full play and can you be the winner in the society。
    第三段为结束段落，总结全文内容并提出建议。首句可以说无论做大事还是小事无论做难事还是容易事都要这个积极现象。第二个句子谈建议让它变的更好。第三个句子谈让它变的更好的方法通常发挥它的好处避免坏处。第四句谈只要有这个积极现象就会享受一个美好丰富和有活力的未来。
    (1)from the above analysis it can be safely concluded that in doing things whether great or small 主题is indispensable on the way to success. (2)it is therefore necessary that some effective measures are taken to make 主题more efficient. (3)on one hand we should raise our awareness of its significance of 主题. on the other hand 不这样的现象应该批评. (4)only with主题 can we embrace a glorious future.
• 純同学
  写海南岛的英语作文
  • S老师
    hainan island is situated in the south of china well-known for its “the end of the sky and the rim of the sea (tianyahaijiao)”. hainan island is the famous scenic spot in china for its golden beaches blue sea and the tropical climate(热带气候). the province is divided into hainan nansha xisha zhongsha islands etc.
    　　haikou is the capital city. the second biggest city sanya hosted the 2003 miss world competition and earned the fame as “hawaii of china”. sanya had been a poor little fishing village until 1954 when the government made it the hainan special economic zone. now there are many fine hotels and golf courses（高尔夫球场）. many new hotels are being built to receive more and more guests from all around the world. tourism now accounts for(占到) 80% of the island’s revenue（收入）.