能否批改一下我写的这篇2017年考研英语二的大作文？

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• C同学
  帮我写一篇关于喜欢什么科目的英语作文？
  • 杨老师
    my favourite subjuct is englishwhy ohi think english is a very interesting subject.do you konw i have a dream one dayi want to go to a western country as the united states.people speak english thereso if i spaek english very welli will go there.maybe i will make friends with them. before i go therei must study english hardly.so every dayi am readingwriting and talking with others.then i find that study english is very interesting.and i am interested in studying english.
• 高同学
  求好心人帮我写一篇英语作文，题目是“通过这门课我学到了些什么”课是金融英语。。谢谢！！！
  • 邵老师
    what i learn in the financial english class
    today's world is the world of economics and in this society which is full of financial crisis we need to use more professional english to communicate with the people all over the world.
    i'm so grateful that the university would let us learn financial english as a course. through this course i have not only improved my standard of english but also enrich my financial knowledge as well as my communication skills.
    i’ve never known i can become more professional at the knowledge of financial securities credit accounting economics and statistics in this course. at first i just wanted to learn english well and i never think about the knowledge of the economics which has become enriched as well.
    in this course i think the most meaningful lesson is about securities investment i learned to read and ask foreign stock markets as well as the financial statements and the stock market with the contacts of the company
    in conclusion i think that the financial english course makes sense which gives us a window to explore the world.
    
    我在金融英语课上学到的
    当今的世界是经济的世界，在这个充满金融危机的当代社会，我们需要用更为专业的英语进行沟通。
    我很庆幸学校开设了金融英语这门课。通过这门课，我不仅提高了英语水平，也丰富了金融知识，提高了交流能力。
    在这门课上，我对金融、证券、信贷、会计、经济、统计的知识更加熟练，超越了我的预期。原本只是想学好英语，没想到这些有关经济专业的知识也变得丰富起来。
    在这门课中，我认为最有意义的是关于证券投资那课，我学会了阅读和询问国外的股市，以及财务报表和股市、公司的联系。
    总之，我认为金融英语这门课很有意义，使我们展望世界的一扇窗。