能否批改一下我写的2011年的这两篇考研英语作文？

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• 肉同学
  写一篇貌似流水账的英语作文
  • 姚老师
    mathers day today was mothers day.i went to my grandmothers home with my parents . i arrived at my grandmothers home at nine oclock my mother said to me the cat is your frandmothers . it had a baby.can you give it a name kittyoki said happily.ok.do you want to see it my mother saked.i said yes and couldmt wait to see the baby cat oh what anice baby cat it was she was sleeping and looked so lovely at lunchtime i gave the mither cat some fish.she finished it quickly and seemded to ask me for more.but to my surprise she fave it to kitty what a kind mother today ive once again experienced the truth os great love of mother with my own eyes
• J同学
  帮写一篇英语作文50字左右
  • 吴老师
    my name is selina. i am a 14 year old student.everyday i have dinner at 6.30 pm . i go to bed at 10.30 pm after finishing my homework .my favorite subjects is music english and pe.i can dance and sing . after class i like to watch some comedy films. august 8st is my birthday. i wants to see a funny movie with friends to celebrate my birthday.我叫瑟琳娜，我是一名十四岁的学生 我每天下午六点半吃晚饭 写完作业后十点半睡觉 我最喜欢的科目是音乐英语和体育课。我能跳舞唱歌。下课后我喜欢看喜剧电影。8月8号是我的生日，我想要和朋友一起去看喜剧电影来庆祝生日。
• G同学
  求一篇用英语写的作文《服装店的广告》
  • 全老师
    come to guangming clothes store 快来光明服装店！
    our clothes are on sale . 我们的衣服正在大减价。
    we sell pants for only 30 yuan. 我们卖的裤子只要30元。
    do you like white bag 你喜欢白色的包吗？
    it's only 15 yuan. 只要15元。
    we have beautiful black hats for only 12 yuan each. 我们有漂亮的黑色帽子只要12元一顶。
    do you like sweaters in red green blue and orange 你喜欢红色、绿色、蓝色和橙色的毛衣吗？
    you can buy it for only 20 yuan. 你能以20元的价格买到它。
    come and see for yourself at guangming clothes store. 亲自来光明服装店看一看吧。