能否批改一下我写的这篇2012年考研英语作文？

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• 吕同学
  写一篇我的大学生活英语作文 120词
  • 石老师
    like the vast majority are too high to accept the most solemn baptism of three young with too much of the most chaotic of the three young college students feel like a big eye-catching red chuaizhuo university admissions i notice in the eyes of their parents look forward to the feelings of pleasure way into the shanghai fisheries university. after a series of complicated enrollment procedures and parents tizhe da packages of baggage busy went to the designated bedroom. one into the room as expected and expected the same four human small bedroom had been packed in together and every newborns family sent out almost all even though the weather was hot and abnormal arrangement of housekeeping is tired big sweat dripping
    can we have everyones faces filled with happy smile. end finally clean up the room saying good-bye of the worth of the parents asked warned him and we will be living together four four-year roommate finally able to communicate well about each others affection. a different character different experiences but holding the same yearning for a better college life so we immediately started arising out of strange and shy as can talk about anything as if an old friend not seen in a long time the same way we lying on their bed space and different places to chat up seem to have lots to talk about words. it is because of this in such a sultry summer night we sleep a
    spent a period in pre-school excitement carefree happy life of indulgence we are going to face is the real university life. freshman year of study not related to professional courses but lay a solid foundation of knowledge with emphasis on english language learning to develop good habits to master the english language proficiency dialogue and writing capabilities. in fact as long as the serious lectures and complete the exercise the examination can cope easily easily resolved. freshman curriculum also very different from primary and secondary schools curriculum less is more some subjects only last week relative to a day left to get a lot of his spare time and sometimes only one lesson a day only . 就像绝大多数接受过高三青春最庄严的洗礼，拥有过高三青春最纷乱的心情的大学新生一样，揣着醒目的大红色大学录取通知书的我，在父母期盼的目光下，心情愉悦地走进了上海水产大学。在办完一连串繁琐的入学手续后，和父母提着大包小包的行李忙忙碌碌地赶往指定的寝室。一踏入房间，果然和预料的一样，小小的四人间寝室已被挤得满满的了，每个新生的家人几乎全体出动，尽管当时的天气炎热异常，布置整理房间已是累得大汗淋漓，可大家每个人的脸上都洋溢着幸福的笑容。好不容易收拾完房间，送走了万般嘱咐叮咛的父母，我们这四个将要共同居住四年的室友终于可以好好地交流一下彼此的感情了。不同的性格，不同的经历，但抱着同样对大学生活的美好向往，使我们立刻摆脱刚开始产生的陌生和害羞，成为无话不谈，好似许久未见的老朋友一样，就这样，我们躺在各自的床上海阔天空，天南地北地聊起来，似乎有说不完的话。也就是因为如此，在这样一个闷热的夏夜，我们失眠了
    在度过了一段开学前心情激动，无忧无虑，开心放纵的生活后，我们即将面临的就是真正的大学生活。大一的学习还未涉及专业课程，只是打好基础知识，重点在于培养良好的英语学习习惯，掌握熟练的英语对话，写作等能力。其实只要认真听课及完成习题，考试都能应付自如，轻松解决。大一的课程安排也与中小学的截然不同，课程少而精，有的学科一星期才上一次，相对地，每天留给自己的课余时间变得很多了，有时一天只有一节课而已。
• J同学
  帮写一篇英语作文50字左右
  • 陆老师
    my name is selina. i am a 14 year old student.everyday i have dinner at 6.30 pm . i go to bed at 10.30 pm after finishing my homework .my favorite subjects is music english and pe.i can dance and sing . after class i like to watch some comedy films. august 8st is my birthday. i wants to see a funny movie with friends to celebrate my birthday.我叫瑟琳娜，我是一名十四岁的学生 我每天下午六点半吃晚饭 写完作业后十点半睡觉 我最喜欢的科目是音乐英语和体育课。我能跳舞唱歌。下课后我喜欢看喜剧电影。8月8号是我的生日，我想要和朋友一起去看喜剧电影来庆祝生日。